In
What Are Big Girls Made Of?, Marge
Piercy uses poetry as an instrument for voicing her political
views and as expositions of human experiences that she has witnessed.
Though she also explores subject matter in her other poems dealing
with an appreciation of nature, her Jewish background, and daily
pressures that most people must face, it is the issues concerning
women specifically which thematically dominate this volume of
poetry and many of her other written works. Each poem uses literary
techniques fittingly to convey its mood and meaning with an abundant
use of similes, metaphors, and alliteration, and including a wealth
of imagery for an enlightening experience and a lack of it for
a more sobering one.
In the first poem "On guard," the speaker in Piercy's
poem confesses her need for her lover to protect her and watch
over her in sickness and in health until death when they part.
This poem is particularly evident in its effective use of language
which include similes, metaphors, alliteration, assonance, and
repetition. In the first stanza, the speaker says that she craves
physical intimacy with her love where they can "curl around
each other like two socks matched and balled in a drawer" and
she can feel safe with her "bodyguard." Then she metaphorically
compares their two bodies sensually to "two S's snaked curve
to curve" as she feels the warmth of his body wrapped around
hers. The speaker continues with the idea of equating lover
as protector and nurturer in the third stanza where she personifies
the illness that she wants him to tuck in and expresses her
hope that whenever she is sick, he will nurse her back to health
"with tea and chicken/ soup whose steam sweetens the house."
In the next stanza, Piercy uses personification again in addition
to alliteration and assonance. "As the knives wink in the thin
light/ and the whips crack out from shelter," her lover will
safeguard her from harm. These repetition of sounds and of phrases
in the poem, such as "I want you," serves to intensify the emotion
and her desire for him to play the role of protector. In the
second half of the poem, she repeats the phrase "guard my body"
twice and then says that they should "guard each other," further
developing a sense of passion that accompanies the sexual references
made in fifth, sixth, and seventh stanzas of him "warm[ing]
me from the inside out," their "shining bones, and "wake[ing]
to the morning fresh/ and wet." To convey another meaning of
the poem, Piercy also uses shifts in language that reveal the
speaker's mindset. In the first four stanzas, when she says
that "I want you," she could be in control in that her desires
are the focus but at the same time, she wants her strong lover
to protect her which would put her into a secondary status.
The feminist she is, Piercy may then have intentionally changed
to imperative language in fifth to seventh stanzas to put the
woman back in control. Then in the last stanza, the speaker
compromises her need for nurturing and her own strength by asking
to "let us guard each other until death" and to be "each other's
rose red warrior."
In "Salt in the afternoon," Piercy goes from a
more subtle sensuality in the previous poem to glaring sex and
sexuality as she likens an erotic love-making experience to
the beauty of the beach. Though never actually stating that
she and her lover are having sex, the speaker in the poem implies
that they are swimming in a sea of seduction, swept up in the
"surf of desire sliding in on the warm beach." The description
of the "pumping back" of the "gorgeous predator" has obvious
sexual connotations as they work up to a climax when the shell
will finally open. Metaphorically as "two great deep currents
colliding into white water," the lovers are "opaline and pearled
with light sweat" which usually comes from that kind of vigorous
physical activity. Finally, they reach their peak of pleasure
when "the clam shell opens/ the oyster is eaten/ [and] the squid
shoots its white ink," the last phrase undoubtedly referring
to ejaculation. Altogether, the erotic imagery and language
show that the lovers have been whisked away by the romantic
representation of the passionate ocean.
Moving from these general themes of love and sex,
Piercy confronts and focuses on more serious issues in "A day
in the life" based on the specific experiences of a woman working
at an abortion clinic. In the poem, the poet commends her for
withstanding the protests and threats of attack from anti-abortion
activists and for continuing to work for what she perceives
is the greater good. The poem traces the routine of this woman
who is constantly in danger of the people who object to her
part in pregnancy termination. First she awakens to a "male
voice promising she will burn in hell," discovers the corpse
of a cat nailed to her porch, and then must retrieve her car
hidden in a neighbor's garage and take a roundabout way to work
as precautionary measures. Upon arriving at the clinic, the
woman then has to face the hostile protesters who consistently
harass her, and "bump and jostle her." At this point, the reader
has most likely realized how strong she must be and all the
energy it must take for her just to make it through the day
when she reaches the inside of the office and she simply sighs.
The poet then makes appeals to pathos, calling
upon the reader to empathize even in the littlest bit with those
who go through abortions. After the speaker lists some common
case scenarios in which abortion may seem the only option, from
health reasons to sexual abuse to rape, the reader may find
it hard to not feel some kind of sympathy for those women who
were put into these desperate and helpless circumstances. Just
as the three men in front of the clinic had tried to appeal
to the woman's emotions by shoving photos of six-month fetuses
in her face, Piercy juxtaposes in the eleventh stanza "I'm going
to cut your throat, you murderer" with "Have a nice day" to
convey the two opposite extremes and hint at the roller coaster
of emotions that everyone involved in abortions must be put
through. Also, after describing her different duties at the
clinic where she "checks them in, takes medical histories, holds
hands, dries tears, hears secrets and lies and horrors, soothes,
[and] continues," the reader has seen how devoted she must be
to the cause and then probably pities her when all the support
that she has given to others rewards her with a boyfriend who
has grown tired of consoling her all the time.
Though "A day in the life" lacks the rich imagery
and figurative language of "On guard" and "Salt in the afternoon,"
the poem's no-nonsense approach and straightforward language
is much more appropriate and effective in conveying the seriousness
of such matters and the dejection of the woman. Every detail
in the poem reinforces the idea that the woman in it must be
extraordinarily courageous to risk her life every day to help
other women get their lives in order. However, there is one
particular example of simile, a technique which she uses frequently
throughout the book, that strikes at the heart of the woman's
daily struggle to do what she believes is right. The comparison
of the day falling on her like a "truckload of wet cement" shows
that she has the strength of character and will power to carry
the weight of such a controversial job. Therefore, the speaker
in the poem wants to commend the woman for her bravery, made
evident in her comment that "this is what I know of virtue/
this is what I know/ of goodness in our time."
In the last included poem, Piercy broadens her
theme by addressing a subject that deals with a whole half of
society. In the poem that bears the same name as this book,
Piercy criticizes women for the materialistic and vain goals
that they strive to achieve for social accessibility, and she
condemns the society which places such weight on how much a
woman has conformed to a standard of beauty portrayed in the
media. She introduces this concept by ironically stating that
"a woman is not made of flesh/ of bone and sinew/ belly and
breasts, elbows and liver and toe." Instead, "she is manufactured
like a sports sedan" and is forced to fit into a certain mold.
If she doesn't, then she must be "retooled, refitted and redesigned
ever decade" to follow whatever the latest fads and trends are.
The simile serves to intensify the idea that women have sacrificed
their uniqueness and in essence their identities and have thus
been likened to a product that can be mass produced and adjusted
for any purpose in mind.
Then in the second stanza, Piercy shifts from
a generality to the specific example of a woman named Cecile
who has gained a reputation as a temptress in college. Described
as the personification of "seduction itself" in school, with
"hips and ass promising" and "her mouth pursed in the dark red
lipstick of desire," Cecile has since lost that status because
she has failed to keep up with the times. "Still wearing skirts/
tight to the knees" when she visited in 1968, she is looked
down upon now simply because she is not wearing the mini skirt
and the "lipstick pale as apricot milk" that is in style at
the moment. The speaker reiterates this point through repetition
in explaining that Cecile is "out of fashion, out of game/ disqualified,
disdained, dis- / membered from the club of desire." No man
wants her anymore just because she does not happen to dress
according to the crowd.
The poet continues to satirize the notion of uniformity
as the speaker reflects on the history of woman's painful pursuit
of beauty. In the days of old, for example, woman had to squeeze
themselves into corsets to achieve the perfect waistline and
into tiny shoes for the appearance of petite, graceful feet.
Donning hair heavily "ornamented with ribbons, vases, grottoes,
mountains, frigates in full sails, balloons, [and] baboons,"
and exposing breasts that are "stuffed up and out/ offered like
apples in a bowl," these 18th century women seem to be nothing
more than dolls and sex objects. Piercy's inclusion of such
improbable and ridiculous items to have in the women's hair
offers the sarcastic, biting tone that is best conveyed by her
characterization of the women "forced into shape/ rigid exoskeleton
torturing flesh" as women "made of pain."
The speaker then continues with her cynical comments
about the apparent stagnation with women's liberation from these
unrealistic ambitions of fitting the image of the ideal woman.
"How superior we [as modern women] are now," the speaker reflects
ironically. She notes that the modern woman, whose thinness
is compared dramatically to a blade of scissors in a simile,
suffers now from exercising each day rigorously and from starving
herself in the name of beauty. Women have become so obsessive
about their looks that they are risking their health for this
purpose, and they have indulged themselves so much on that fantasy
of having a "body of rosy glass that never wrinkles, never grows,
never fades" that they become engaged in an asceticism that
leaves each of them "hungry, always hungry." The speaker points
out that even now the women are "made of pain."
With all this fuss that women go through to look
good, the speaker wonders in the sixth and seventh stanza why
cats and dogs can get along fine without giving in to the societal
pressures and humans cannot. In the animals' case, they never
care about the "furry flesh," "hoop skirts or push up bras/
rib removal or liposuction." They "fall in love as often as
we do, as passionately" regardless of any superficial characteristics.
It is for us that "poodles are clipped to topiary hedges" and
it us that surrenders too easily to the cause of aesthetics.
The speaker then begins to ponder what it would be like "if
only we could like each other raw" for the quirks and imperfections
that distinguish us from other and define who we are. Instead,
we follow for the sake of fashion and we pay attention to what's
hot and what's not just because we understand the nature of
others and ourselves to judge on the basis of looks. The speaker
then seems exasperated by this that she finally ends with a
question and with the reader questioning just when women "will…not
be compelled to view their bodies as science projects/ gardens
to be weeded/ dogs to be trained." She wonders whether there
will ever be a time when a woman will learn to accept what she
looks like as a part of who she is and a time when she will
"cease to be made of pain."
Altogether, these four poems from Marge Piercy's
collection called What Are Big Girls Made Of? highlight
the experience of being a woman. Though critical of some and
praising of others, her poetry is on the whole the mark of a
woman who has a lot to say and is able to say it with a refined
eloquence. Her poems are littered with different types of descriptive
and figurative language that elucidate and strengthen the expression
of her feelings allowing the reader to more readily relate to
those experiences. Whether she writes of rapturous moments of
pleasure or a daily routine fraught with danger, Piercy articulates
these true-to-life moments with both embellished beauty and
simplicity.